October Girl

(Jess) It hurt like hell when he stomped on my back, I've had broken rib, bones, I've almost had my face burnt off and nothing hurt more than Tobi's hit. ...

(Jess) I didn't want to have to do this but I kneed him where it counts and began to run, after he doubled over and cursed he tackled me from ...

7/10 cute Amber real Cute

*we've posted on this storybook so many times I'm actually getting sick of YWS... I never thought that could happen... stupid slow speed interenet.*

you've had this valentines day right? And still I just love it 9/10

(Jess) *ok ^_^* I punched at his face and kicked at him, he punched me, making me see stars I hissed. He got on top of me shakling my wrists. ...

(Jess) I growled it didn't sound like a human, I right hooked Tobi hearing his neck snap as he rann into me driving my backwards and out the window, he ...

**read my post above yours which is the one above the one I said 'what?' Jessica is already headin out the front door.*

**what?***

ha ha lol I love it 8/10

(Jess) He pulled me into a hug, I felt freaking short he was at least five inches taller than me. I hugged him too then whispered. "I'm sorry." I then ...

(Jess) "Tobi, I'm warning you, let me go." I growled....

(Jess) "I can't I'm sorry. Tobi, let me go... please... before I hurt you." I said. "You could never hurt me... physically anyways." He glared.. "Please, just let me go." ...

(Jess) *Ha! I snagged a computer and hacked into my cousins e-mail... ok but it's still me, Max* My eyelids fluttered, I forced myself awake. It was almost dawn and ...

Hey, OE-I don't mean to sound harsh but I think you need to break this up. Like three lin es or four then hit enter twice and start with the ...